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These are some of the reasons as to why\
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whether you\
cannot do so,\
delete "where"\
chose one of them, either "needed" or "wanted", or perhaps "acquired"?\
not sure what you mean here\'85\

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\b0 that are close\
This means that
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What makes it complicated?\

\i0 \cf0 What do you mean by "human"? A player or a Terran?\

\i \cf2 before what?\
What is brute forcing?\

\i0 \cf0 ?\

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\i \cf2 Put these two sentences together\
Why should a map in StarCraft be perceived as a grid? Are you rather suggesting that one should consider it as a grid in order to understand what you're about to explain?\
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\b0 Husk tittel?\

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Boolean\
if it\
in(?)
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\i0 \cf0 means(?)\
in(?)\
in(?)\
Figure?\
delete "down"\
units\
Figure?
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remember reference\
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\b0 the\
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\i \cf2 Rephrase?
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know(?)
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New section, mention the name of the author again
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delete ","
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Who is "he"?\
change OK to something more specific\'85 OK is quite vague\'85. \'85. ..\
What is AIIDE ?\
Who are you talking about?\
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\b0 maneuvering
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\i0 \cf0 spacing here?\
spacing here?\
spacing here?\
spacing here?\
spacing here?\
spacing here?\
spacing here?\
spacing here?
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Who?\
Who?
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has(?)\
This means that\

\i \cf2 perhaps explain what you do differently?
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\i \cf2 Who?\
Does it let the reader control anything, really?\
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\b0 Forgot what API is.. I'm just assuming its high tech Gl\'f8s lingo
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\i \cf2 What is CBR?\
What is BWSAL?\

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This should have been presented earlier, since you've already mentioned BWSAL??\
Perhaps rephrase this\
Repetition from previous section\
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\i \cf2 I think you should rewrite this section so its clearer what you mean here
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are you missing a word here? "way"?\

\i0 \cf0 do not
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\b0 Not sure what you mean here\'85 And what is MOO optimization and GA?\
word missing here? "used" ?\
This info should perhaps be moved up, to previous section where you fist mention genome\

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\b0 This means that
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\i0 \cf0 ??\

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\b0 depending\
whether\

\i \cf2 why?
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perhaps change to "directed" or "controlled"?\
the maximum shooting distance of the enemy unit (
\i \cf2 or "eMSD", as you've mentioned above as one of the terms you'll be using)\

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\i\b0 \cf2 Not sure whether "implicitly" is the correct word in this context?\
what kind of "care" do you mean here? Perhaps explain what you have actually done?\
not sure how "StarGate" can calculate something\'85?\

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rewrite sentence\

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\i0 \cf0 you should perhaps mention the first time you use "Potential Fields" that you will be using "PF" for short (you did not do so in 
\b 6.2 Potential Fields
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\i \cf2 0.04 what? Are you talking about percentage here?\

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\i Rather than saying "the AI", you should make it explicit, referring to it as "our AI" or something like that.\
which AI; yours or the other developed by "??" ?\
why "similar" and not the same? What potential compromise might this lead to?\
who are you referring to?\

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p.46
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This information should be moved up to where you first mention that you only do similar scenario and not the same as whoever you are talking about\

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directed to\

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